A tight corner.
I was thinking fewer pull lines could help. Cleaner version is in my gallery. .
I think I'd go with fewer puller lines as well. Aside from that though, I do like how it moves.
Any thought on adding any colour to it?
How about zero pull lines?
You don't need pull lines to express motion
BTW nice job : thumbup
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Sparring speed is a matter of simple physics:
The height of your flight is inversely proportionate to the mass of your ass.
That would make a really cool tattoo!
I don't like how the font tapers, it makes it difficult to read. And the pull lines work if you're shooting for an anime sort of look but I'd say they should flow in a different direction or somehow obscured to indicate that he's moving toward me and not just down and to the left. Those lines tell me he just came in hard from up and to the right which isn't what should be going on so it confuses my bra-a-a.. in..
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Nice work! I like both. The one with lame ass pull lines a little more.
Originally Posted by Dalton
That made me laugh so frickin hard!
How about if the BCSB and other deco radiated from the tire contact down and to the right. Sort of like a shadow of the rider and bike but with the letters.
And while I found the pull lines "busy" I thought they added something. I guess I'm undecided.
A backyard mechanic without a service manual is just like a hooker without a lamp pole.... they are both in the dark.
Originally Posted by Crass
That looks sweet.
Nice bug splatter on the visor.Very realistic!
Good Luck and Godspeed!
A splatter that big must have been a bird or a flying squirrel or somethin. . . . .Originally Posted by squirly